His Final View: A Poem About a Doomed Love

LCM Linda on Oct 3, 2010

Tags: doomed love, lunar anomaly, Poetry, spider, writing challenge

His Final View is a doomed love poem for Triond Writing Challenge Round 29 organized by Duff D Moss. Challenged words are lunar anomaly and spider.

(Image Credit: featurepics.com)

His Final View

Every night spider looked up at the sky.
He enjoyed the lady changing face.
Fondness for this beauty was scoring high.
Would she take his affection with grace?

Pure white beam cleansed one’s distress.
Tranquility amplified in the night.
Passing loneliness was not a stress.
Eight legs were busy in doing right.

Threads were crossing here and there,
Weaving to capture the lady more,
A full possession holy to dare,
Till end, eyes were blood red and sore.

Lunar anomaly was all he got,
Full moon kissed him good-bye in red hot.

My other entries to Triond Writing Challenges that you may interest in reading:

A Rainy Man: a Poem about Love & Life (Round 24)

Let’s Rock: A Poem about Childhood (Round 25)

Who Eventually Won? : A Poem about Killing (Round 26)

What a Fate: A Poem about Life (Round 27)

Go to Hell: A Poem about Penalty (Round 28)

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Comments (29)

Starpisces on Oct 3, 2010
beautifully written.
^_^
Jimmy Shilaho on Oct 3, 2010
A well written entry. Who wins these contests?
Ethics0006 on Oct 3, 2010
Nice Poem
zulfiqarali5 on Oct 3, 2010
Thanks for share . nice informative material !
Ruby Hawk on Oct 3, 2010
Hey, that’s okay.
Noeal V on Oct 3, 2010
Nice Share.
Tulan on Oct 3, 2010
sweet,
LCM Linda on Oct 3, 2010
Hello, thank you for all your comments.

Jimmy, everyone who can come up with a piece of work, (poem, article, short story etc.) with the challenged words is the winner. The writing challenge is a challenge to yourself. There is no competition among the participants.

For anyone who are interested to know more about this writing challenge and / or see the entries from different fellow members, please go to the Triond forum for the corresponding threads. Enjoy.
Brewed Coffee on Oct 3, 2010
This is a good one! Really nice!
Butterfly Musings on Oct 3, 2010
a great one. love the imagery of spiderlike musings in words.. great!!
Eunice Tan on Oct 4, 2010
Well said.
Spiritt on Oct 4, 2010
I absolutely loved this one. It was cute and charming.
Marie Milton on Oct 4, 2010
This is lovely, Linda ..

I love the picture at the top! and the imagination is just great for the challenge. Duffy will be pleased
Marie Milton on Oct 4, 2010
This is lovely, Linda =D..

I love the picture at the top! and the imagination is just great for the challenge. Duffy will be pleased
papaleng on Oct 4, 2010
A well-composed one full of emotions.
mkd1788 on Oct 4, 2010
nice poem..nice challenge you have organized..
LCM Linda on Oct 4, 2010
Hi, thank you for all your comments.

mkd1788, the nice writing challenge is organized by a Triond fellow member Duff D Moss. I am a participant only.

For anyone who are interested to know more about this writing challenge and / or see the entries from different fellow members, please go to the Triond forum for the corresponding threads. Enjoy.
miraj on Oct 5, 2010
That’s very cool,Linda.

I enjoyed the spiderlike musings.

well done.
hfj on Oct 5, 2010
A vivid expression of lunar anomaly of the spider. Well done.
cebah on Oct 5, 2010
I like the spider weaving for the moon. Lovely.
cebah on Oct 5, 2010
I like the spider weaving for the moon. Lovely.
cebah on Oct 5, 2010
I like the spider weaving for the moon. Lovely poem.
Alistair Briggs on Oct 6, 2010
Good stuff
choochoo on Oct 6, 2010
good poem
Rod Ferrandino on Oct 6, 2010
I enjoyed reading what it seemed like you enjoyed writing
Darla Cooke on Oct 7, 2010
Nice poem for the challenge.
Duff D Moss on Oct 8, 2010
zulfiqarali5 on Oct 3, 2010
Thanks for share . nice informative material !

WTF???

Anyway – yeah – lovely peace. What a torture it would be to always see an unattainable desire.
irenen1 on Oct 8, 2010
The picture could have stood alone to satisfy the challenge.

The poetry equally hit home. Great job!
gaby7 on Dec 18, 2010
A moving Poem!

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