Limerick.

You don’t take me out anymore
Cried wife as she pointed toward door
You promised the moon
But soon changed your tune
For now we have Mars to explore

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  • Muhammad Fajar Marthias on Jun 23, 2011

    nice share,thank you

  • Wrath Warbone on Jun 23, 2011

    She must have married an astronaut! They say Mars is nice this time of year but I have my doubts. I guess his wife does too. Mars represent masculine energy in mythology. Maybe she will like it there! I hope so. LOL!

  • Lynn Hollis on Jun 23, 2011

    The honeymoon is over, I guess. Funny.

  • erwinkennythomas on Jun 23, 2011

    it’s always something!

  • Cyni1106 on Jun 24, 2011

    So true, you can never satisfy a woman. nicely put, hats off.

  • kimberlyds on Jun 24, 2011

    lol – that was a good one!! :)
    Wrath, is that really true? Must plan a holiday there then…lol

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