This was written when I was in high school and I never thought it was any good until my English teacher my senior year gave me the encouragement I needed to continue writing.

Many people on the streets use old, torn up newspapers for blankets.
Many people on the streets stand in elongated lines awaiting –
a bowl of steaming soup,
a piece of fresh bread, and
a cup of hot tea.
The shelters are jammed packed; many will be turned away before night even begins to fall.
The lonely vagabond, with an empty guitar case, plays in the middle of the sidewalk –
anticipating money that we might be kind enough to give.
The poorly dressed blind man on the corner with,
dark glasses,
white cane, and
tin cup, stands — longing to hear the clank of coins hitting bottom.
The homely looking woman pushing her cart full of her most cherished paraphernalia –
shopping from one dumpster to the next, in hopes that
she’ll find anything to make it through, yet another night.
The many pindling youth running around in their bare feet and shabby clothes.
The many skin-boned vagrants huddled around a barrel in which, they started a fire;
fighting for just a taste of –
a can of already opened beans,
a slab of already used bacon,
a part of already eaten sandwich, or just the milk of human kindness.

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  • Kristie Claar on May 29, 2009

    More background on this piece. This was originally an assignment I had to do when I was in 10th or 11th grade (can’t remember). I was very proud of this piece, however the teacher didn’t grade it very well and I was devastated.

    It was my Senior Year that I resubmitted this piece for a 12th grade writing assignment and it was the first time I received an A+ from my English teacher that year! He gave me the encouragement I needed to keep writing.

    Thanks Mr. Stump!!!!

    Enjoy and God Bless
    ~kc~

  • neopisiva on Jul 30, 2011

    Hey, KC, it sounds very well written and observed,I find it hard to believe that it wasn’t graded good at first.Luckily, there was someone who recognized its power and potential, and so here it is-you are not afraid to share it with us.Thanks, KC.

  • Kristie Claar on Jul 30, 2011

    Thanks neopisiva, I was really upset at first, but I am so glad that I didn’t give up. Thank you for your wonderful comment, God Bless!

  • foxpete88 on Aug 6, 2011

    good work, thanks.-

  • Kristie Claar on Aug 8, 2011

    Thank you foxpete88, God Bless!

  • Peg Borman on Oct 8, 2011

    Sometimes it takes another set of eyes, and a deeper understanding to see what someone else has missed.

  • Kristie Claar on Oct 11, 2011

    Thanks Mom! Love you!

  • Kristie Claar on Nov 3, 2011

    Thank you all for helping me help the Klein family, God Bless!

  • Rayann Borman on Nov 4, 2011

    Love and Prayers to the Klein family.

  • Kristie Claar on Nov 18, 2011

    Thank you all for reading and commenting. Thank you all for helping me to help the Klein family. God Bless all of you.

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