Hold on One More Time

heidiefernandez on Aug 21, 2010

Struggles in relationship.

Hold on one more time

Stream of joys in our life

Laughter we shared

So beautiful to glare

Sometimes tears falls

Like a never ending rainfall

We break each other’s feelings

And used our shoulders

And goes to its instant healing

Our emotions rested in sea

But there are times it moves

With its ridges and rippling

A sudden beckon of hatred

But it will be still again

Moving so lightly with air

Its wings and music of love

Joy and Cherish lifted by a dove…

I think we’re just fine

And if these rain pour down again

I guess all we have to do is

Hold on one more time…

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Comments (12)

LoveDoctor on Aug 21, 2010
Lovely work.
L R Humphries on Aug 21, 2010
Very heartfelt and emotive. This rawness really engages the reader, an excellent read.

Lewis
Ethics0006 on Aug 21, 2010
Very well Written poem
Jenny Heart on Aug 21, 2010
Well Done!
melphens on Aug 21, 2010
i like it! impressive it is..
GodsGrace on Aug 21, 2010
Great Article
Joseph Scott on Aug 21, 2010
Love is pain sometimes.. Great post!
giftarist on Aug 21, 2010
Kabayan, ang galing mo..Pwede gawing kanta.
Phoenix Montoya on Aug 22, 2010
Hold on to it… Yes, that is the only option IF we really love that somebody. IF NOT…. good bye (thats how i think) Well another lovely piece of yours my friend.
suhail on Aug 22, 2010
holding on is a bliss and a curse … killer picture complimenting a killer prose !
Lipstick on Aug 22, 2010
a nice piece of poetry about holding on
nice one kabayan
papaleng on Aug 24, 2010
Beautiful, so deep and very nice flow. Makata ka talaga. Saludo ako sa iyo.

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