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Hold on Tight

lxdollarsxl on Dec 28, 2010
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Hold on to your woman.

Nothing is better beside you

Than her head on that pillow

Giving as she does sometimes

Unmistakable grief and heartbreaking pain

Still you know without thinking

We would do it all again

Kiss her and cuddle her tight

Every day and night

Otherwise my friend you may find she has slipped away

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  • Larry Fish on Dec 28, 2010

    Written very well, good job.

  • Joie Schmidt on Dec 28, 2010

    Beautiful.

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Joie Schmidt.

  • DeEeMaN on Dec 29, 2010

    Beautiful.

  • bigpapadan on Dec 29, 2010

    Very true words my friend, great post as all ways.

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