Hold Onto You

ashan1614 on Sep 9, 2009

Love poem with an unexpected twist.

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I’ve loved and lost so many times

As many of us do

But now I’ve found my soul mate and

I’ve gotta hold onto you

I haven’t felt this way in years

So giddy and brand new

To keep this feeling, I know that

I need to hold onto you

Often times I’m awestruck

You’re too good to be true

Your love for me is all I need

I must hold onto you

Never thought I’d be so smitten

After years of being blue

And I will do all that I can

Just to hold onto you

I’m floating high above the clouds

Much like the morning dew

And the only way to stay here

Is to hold onto you

You make me so very happy

And say you’re happy, too

Just wondering what SHE would say

If I hold onto you

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Comments (8)

Jenny Heart on Sep 9, 2009
Great unexpected twist. Touching!
ginahinderliter on Sep 9, 2009
love poems make me smile
LOVELYHONEY on Sep 9, 2009
Hold on life has more to give
Than to take
Hold on I still wait.

You are qualitative
I am quantitative,
Still we must hold on
As all we have common
Is total equality

Please do hold on
‘Tis good too
You never know
When the hold will loosen
Ah! The one they\\\’ll be holding
Is not you.

Hold on till the cows come home
There is more love in holding
Of what remains
When we have held on
For long
Love my friend also sustains.

LH
cutedrishti8 on Sep 9, 2009
Nice one to share..Great work,,..
Collette Edwards on Sep 10, 2009
great poem, love the twisted end, just don’t hold so tight and go so high that the enevitable fall dosen’t crush you. LOVE IT!!
Aldrin A Wilding West on Sep 11, 2009
Enjoyed this one too, you rhyme really well, and your content is so heartfelt.
ashan1614 on Sep 15, 2009
I appreciate the comments – keep ‘em coming!
Lee Ness on Sep 23, 2009
Hi Enjoy this poem, very warm
Thanks Lee Ness
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