Sometimes dreams are all we have.

Deep within you,
I can see,
A tiny little piece of me,
You carry with you,
A summer’s breeze,
A wave that rolls,
Upon a thrashing sea,
You lay beside me,
While I sleep,
You watch me,
Comforting my weary soul,
In your hands and heart,
You forever keep,
That innocent child,
While he sleeps,
I feel the love,
Deep within as it grows,
Longing for your touch,
Anticipations begins to flow,
Like rolling thunder,
Emotions build,
Lips gently touch,
Tongues entwine as one,
I feel your breath,
Washing over me,
Like a hot summer’s breeze,
Our hearts pound,
Together as one,
As we rise and fall,
Slowly upon the ground,
We savor the love,
The passions found,
Yes deep within you,
I can see,
That tiny little piece of me,

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  • nobert soloria bermosa on Jan 4, 2009

    very lovely and romantic,

  • Glynis Smy on Jan 4, 2009

    Peaceful and calm, lovely

  • Morgana on Jan 4, 2009

    Wow what a poem. This is the type of poem a woman wants . It is deep , tender and has a sensual tone.

  • Mary Contrary on Jan 4, 2009

    Nice piece! Loved the ending! :)

  • Michele Cameron Drew on Jan 4, 2009

    My friend, I believe that you have outdone yourself with this one! I think that this is the best of yours that I have read. Beautiful! You get the SU on this one. :)

    -M

  • Lauren Axelrod on Jan 4, 2009

    Be still my heart, this one was deeply touching and romantic and the flow was smooth as silk. Well done!

  • The Quail on Jan 4, 2009

    Namaste to all and thank you all for the support of my articles. It friends and family like you, that help me to aspire to new heights in my writings. I will also soon try to stumble more of all your works as well as re open the featured writers spot on my stumble site as i found it was a great success and an aid to all who took part in it by allowing me to showcase their works. mikej (The Quail).

  • Unofre Pili on Jan 5, 2009

    Lines are simply beautiful.

  • Mystical Whitewolf on Jan 7, 2009

    Wonderful poem,this one is well written. It seems when we love a part of us is always with the person.

  • Juancav on Jan 7, 2009

    Moving poem, seasoned with sea and sea air, to join two people who love one another.

  • Auron Renius on Jan 7, 2009

    A very sweet piece of work.

  • eddiego65 on Jan 8, 2009

    Lovely romantic piece.

  • annamaria on Jan 8, 2009

    An intense ,romantic,wonderful,sweet poem …simply beautiful!!!!

  • Liane Schmidt on Jan 8, 2009

    Beautiful, exquisite*

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • Debra. on Jan 15, 2009

    That was a wonderful and beautiful piece of poetry! I enjoyed reading every bit of this poem!

    God bless, Quail.

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