Thoughts of home.

home is where i was born.

home is where i grew up to crisp mid-winter mornings,

opening the kitchen door, feeling the cold blast

of air as i check to see if the milk had been delivered yet.

home is the patchworks lands,

acre after acre of corn and beans

split only by a dirt road going off into the distance.

home is the smells

of wet leaves and raked grass in the fall.

home is the different smells of late fall snows

from the early spring snows.

home is the places that are a part of me,

familiar friends i visited often.

home is the cold edge of air

in the winter, driving around at night

snow crystals reflecting light

like someone had shoveled diamonds

onto the road.

home is watching the mud-drenched muskrat

waddle it’s way down to the river.

home is the slow pace of living there,

not this break-neck pace

where time flies past unseen,

uncounted, and suddenly I do

not recognize my reflection in the glass.

home is where my dead are buried,

lying, waiting, knowing I will soon

join them, as one of them.

i often wonder if i will make it

home, before i die, once more to be apart

of the smells,

and the snow,

and the gentle breezes of spring.

God, I miss home.

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  • oldster on Aug 12, 2009

    I like it Stephen. Global warming will change all that alas.

  • maranatha on Aug 12, 2009

    There is something about familiar smells, isn’t there, that makes us feel we are home. As a desert rat transplanted from Great Lakes country, I identified with this very much.

  • Littlekid137 on Dec 16, 2009

    I really like poems lke this that have parallelism in it. Home is a great place, familiar, and you feel at peace.

  • lillyrose on Dec 16, 2009

    Very beautiful poem! you opened your heart and it showed.

  • serowa on Dec 16, 2009

    The ending is a bit sad but i guess we must all reflect on that truth. Great way of nostalging of what you identify with as home.

  • Sheila M on Dec 16, 2009

    This was another of my favorites in this anthology. There is so much beauty in simplicity. Loved it

  • miraj on Dec 17, 2009

    wonderful reflection.you showed us how treasured our home is.

  • Nicholas Peterson on Dec 18, 2009

    a interesting and accurate poem, thats for sure. would have loved to see more sensory images or something, to really get the overall sense and feeling of the place where someone belongs.

    otherwise, great stuff.

  • John Arthur Beaman on Dec 20, 2009

    Home? Home is where my hell is.

  • Theresa Johnson on Dec 21, 2009

    I think that all of us miss home from time to time…. Even if “home” was not the best place to have been, their is always a part of us longing to return.

  • hfj on Dec 21, 2009

    Home is where the heart is, and your heart is definitely where you were born and raised. As many of us know, the simple things are what make us the happiest. Thanks for sharing this and taking our memories back home, if it was for just a mere moment. well done friend.

  • Cebah on Dec 22, 2009

    You have portrayed a lovely image of your home. I hope you make it back there some day. It sounds wonderful.

  • A.L.Smith on Jan 2, 2010

    Home is the place you are most content. Some of us do not find home until we are adults. Great to feel that way about a home. I agree about the smells, no where else smells ike home.

  • Darla Cooke on Jan 27, 2010

    Lovely poem!

  • David De Jesus on Feb 12, 2010

    Home is where the Love is. Nice work.

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