On your job is not where you get your honey.

Don’t get your honey

Where you make your money

This create problems between the two

One, you will be watching each other

Two, you want be able to do your job

because your mind is on your honey

Three, this will be very stressful

so, don’t get your honey where you make your money.

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  • Teves on Oct 29, 2009

    Very nice information provided…
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  • Ajsta on Oct 29, 2009

    Nice poem, I totally agree, Love an your job does mot mix well! :p

  • Darla Smith on Oct 29, 2009

    Good advice.

  • mathurans on Oct 29, 2009

    Very Good money & honey. You can find my article do a comment . Thanks:
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  • martinpm on Oct 29, 2009

    wow nice one, liked it!

  • Christine Ramsay on Oct 29, 2009

    I enjoyed that. Well done.

    Christine

  • cutedrishti8 on Oct 29, 2009

    Great one..

  • lillyrose on Oct 29, 2009

    Hey good one! I think you should sell this for the company hand books!

  • Frosty Johnson on Oct 29, 2009

    Ha ha very true

  • Annashank on Oct 29, 2009

    Nice one!!! :-)
    Check out my latest addition: http://authspot.com/poetry/all-for-you-3/

  • diamondpoet on Oct 29, 2009

    Yes I agree this could make for ackward moments some day down the line. Good Write.

  • Elizabethabbott on Oct 29, 2009

    I agree also! Nice write here Thanks for sharing!

  • yamilka cirino on Oct 29, 2009

    Also, if that person is no longer your honey, you will still have to work with them…yikes!

  • Will Gray on Oct 29, 2009

    Well said!

  • Momof4 on Oct 29, 2009

    Nice poem, well said! It is so true. Thanks for sharing.

  • Sourav on Oct 29, 2009

    Enjoyable write!

  • athena goodlight on Oct 29, 2009

    This is good. I agree. That’s why office romance is risky.

  • honey2licq on Oct 29, 2009

    most men should heed this warning but usually end up makin honey with their secretary

  • Hettie on Oct 29, 2009

    Hello , great advice for young and old. Some how an old song comes to mind this was about driving; it goes keep your hands on the wheel , keep your eyes on the road a head .

  • inuni on Oct 29, 2009

    I agree.

  • Emma Green on Oct 29, 2009

    Good write!

  • alc on Oct 29, 2009

    thanks for the share

  • Mystify on Oct 29, 2009

    Great write ceegirl! Very creative with some good advice!

  • Guy Hogan on Oct 29, 2009

    Good advice. Lucky for me that I work at home.

  • Shirley Shuler on Oct 29, 2009

    Very nice, I couldn’t agree more!

  • Frances Lawrence on Oct 29, 2009

    Good advice, well put.

  • larry84 on Oct 29, 2009

    great write

  • Eunice Tan on Oct 30, 2009

    So cute & lovely

  • Will Dee on Oct 30, 2009

    Good advice to live by. Thanks for sharing.

  • keswa110 on Oct 30, 2009

    Very nice i like it.

  • Lord Banks on Oct 30, 2009

    Yup business and pleasure hard one to pull off [excuse the unintended pun] liked it

  • Joe Dorish on Oct 30, 2009

    Totally agree dating at work is really bad if you breakup.

  • mxpower on Oct 30, 2009

    Awsome write great advice.

  • bobbyt on Oct 30, 2009

    This will be a problem.

  • thresiapaulose on Oct 30, 2009

    Nice, ceegirl, a good work

  • Themax on Oct 31, 2009

    kool 1 very nice

  • Remmyramesh on Oct 31, 2009

    Nice..

  • wanjiku on Oct 31, 2009

    Good advice!

  • sinpalabras on Oct 31, 2009

    Very Nice!
    Congratulations!

  • Dr Robert Brignall on Oct 31, 2009

    As the old expression goes, “Don’t dip your quill in the company ink.” You rock, ceegirl

  • Adam Henry Sears on Nov 1, 2009

    This is a cute little ditty. It has a ring to it and it’s true advice. I like the rhythm that you started with, and I think it shows great promise.

    I wonder if maybe by working with the rhythm you could make some stanzas out of it, because it almost seems like it doesn’t have enough space within itself for the topics. You could make them as small as rhyming couplets or quatrains and use one of these to represent each segment of thought. That would equal out to about 5 or 6 stanzas depending on a similar choice of topics. This is, of course, only a suggestion, :) and I think that it will do your piece here more good than harm.

    Other that that, great job. Have a nice day.

  • deep blue on Nov 1, 2009

    I like this cee, I never knew you could be hilarious at times. Keeps me laughing.

  • AlmaG on Nov 2, 2009

    This is a very fun poem

  • deklin42 on Nov 3, 2009

    Nice! I enjoyed it.

  • T.Rex McGoogle on Nov 3, 2009

    I Cee very clearly where you are coming from. Great advice.

  • Brian Daniel Stankich on Nov 4, 2009

    agreed

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