It has been said that "poetry is what’s lost in translation", yet I couldn’t resist translating -or rather fully rewriting- this one. I had written it for a partner of mine some time ago in greek and I wanted to share it with non-greek speakers too.

Those eyes of honey and green
let me dip in and stay within
they look like drops of honey on grass
honeygreen blossoms on my lass

green blossoms wet with honey
sweeter even than your lips
my senses are running wild
when you give me your kiss

like liquid fire is your kiss 
your breath’s a hot flame
when we unite it’s a bliss
I forget even my own name

Image source

Forgive me for not being able to find honeygreen blossoms :)

Image via Wikipedia

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  • lapasan on Nov 26, 2010

    Thanks for translating this nice Greek poem in English to share with us. God bless!

  • V rank on Nov 27, 2010

    very lovely… i awe you for this…

  • Sarah Rebecca on Nov 27, 2010

    Thanks for sharing!

  • albert1jemi on Nov 28, 2010

    great share

  • Sharpedon on Nov 29, 2010

    Many thanks for commenting on my poem!

  • bigpapadan on Nov 29, 2010

    Lovely work; I understand that sense of total surrender to another person. Very impressive poem.

  • J M Lennox on Dec 1, 2010

    A really lovely poem.

  • 3cardmonte on Dec 2, 2010

    That was beautiful

  • xyz999 on Dec 3, 2010

    A lovely p[oem with such powerful words. Thank you for this wondeful post!

  • Goodselfme on Dec 6, 2010

    The blossoms you found were just fine. the poem was exceptional even translated.thank you for publishing and sharing it with me.

  • Nina Mason on Jan 14, 2011

    Well done translating it and making it work so well.
    I love the title, it drew me in and the photos are captivating along with the words.

  • andriantoniou on Feb 1, 2011

    This is an amazing poem! I like it very much.

  • Minister Marlene on Feb 9, 2011

    Honey and green blossoms! Lovely poem. Full of romance and perfect for the season.

  • pippe vonkuhne on Feb 26, 2011

    A lovely poem, I’m a romantic. The images are beautiful. Thanks Sharpedon.

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