A short poem about believing in a positive outcome or what we call as "Hope".

              

Just as the rays of sun,
O’er the green field land,
Reaching to the farthest side
Drawing a lovely sight
After the love that fails,
New hope awaits us there.

- Roseller Suico Fiel II

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  • Midie on Dec 13, 2009

    Wonderful picture with great story

  • jaysonv on Dec 13, 2009

    thanks Midie..

  • Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Dec 13, 2009

    That’s beautifully expressed. :)

  • Will Dee on Dec 13, 2009

    Beautiful picture and verse.

  • tinz28 on Dec 13, 2009

    short but full of meaning!

  • Yovita Siswati on Dec 14, 2009

    Lovely and meaningful.

  • jaysonv on Dec 14, 2009

    Thanks tinz28 and Yovita..

  • Peter Cimino on Dec 14, 2009

    Very good poem.

  • jaysonv on Dec 15, 2009

    thanks peter.

  • Roseller S. Fiel, II on Dec 19, 2009

    actually, the first title of the poem is JORDAN, name of my ex. hehehehehe. (take note of the first letter of every line). but i decided to change it. hehehehehe…..

  • ladydryle on Dec 20, 2009

    nice one….very poetic..

  • George Mendoza on Dec 21, 2009

    nice poem.. i really like it. Thanks to you.

  • jaysonv on Dec 22, 2009

    Thanks as always..

  • jaysonv on Dec 26, 2009

    MERRY CHRISTMAS and Advance Happy New Year guys.

  • jaysonv on Dec 28, 2009

    keep on publishing interesting articles guys! Thanks.. Happy New Year everyone!

  • coolbryan on Jan 1, 2010

    nice

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