This small but powerful phrase of encouragement has reminded me in moments I had forgotten my determination.

Don’t Give up
Keep moving along
Don’t ever forget
Life’s beautiful song
Don’t let any trouble
Cause you to quit
Look past defeat
You can do it!
Bend just a little
Rest, or slow down
But never quit trying
To spin it around
Don’t give up
Pull up your Chin
If you never give up
You’ll always win

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  • QuinMonty86 on Jan 3, 2009

    Very Nice.

  • Colleen Ranney on Jan 3, 2009

    Thanks!

  • Debra. on Jan 9, 2009

    That was very sweet with an important message!

    Very well done, Colleen!

    God bless.

  • Colleen Ranney on Jan 9, 2009

    Thanks Debra!

  • Tennessee Thompson on Jan 9, 2009

    Very encouraging poem. Good job.

  • nutuba on Jan 12, 2009

    Nice flow, nice rhythm, nicely done!

  • Colleen Ranney on Oct 22, 2010

    Thank you..wishing each of you ALL THE BEST!!

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