Horse and Crow

Nisa West on Jan 16, 2010

A poem.

Rising over the dark side of the cliff,

Crow hollered out to Horse,

“Rex Avian!”

I saw a figment of what I left behind,

Before my mind had a chance to miss

what I actually lost.

The Horse cheated with power,

So during training

Got thrown off.

I do not love the horse any less.

I’m just more cautious now,

All movements with an added Awareness.

Rising over the light drenched side

of the burnt mesa,

Crow hollered out to Horse,

“I won!”

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Comments (13)

ceegirl on Jan 16, 2010
Nice they communicate.
The Cinders on Jan 16, 2010
I love this! Very mysterious and alluring. Captivating!
drelayaraja on Jan 16, 2010
Wonderful article. nice wordings
drelayaraja on Jan 16, 2010
Lovely write
ken bultman on Jan 17, 2010
We all have our strengths, weaknesses and talents. Nicely composed.
lillyrose on Jan 17, 2010
Great poem and lovely pics to go with.
Darla Cooke on Jan 17, 2010
Great poem and I love the pic!
Mushtaq on Jan 17, 2010
Nice poem and the pic aswell. I can see the sea in the horse’s eye.
qasimdharamsy on Jan 17, 2010
Nice post…
papaleng on Jan 18, 2010
nice post and good picture.
T. S. GARP on Feb 9, 2010
Good poem!
Johanny Lisbeth on Feb 14, 2010
Wow fabulous poem and stunning imagses!!!! amazing painting!!!
Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Feb 14, 2010
Great poem.

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