Breeze is gentle, but one can enjoy it only if it is in the right temperature and with the right amount of moisture (humidity) in it.

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Painful Breeze!

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Wind blowing on face,

Is fun if it is not hot!

Sunny noon drive hurts!

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Sea Saves!

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Waiting for sea breeze,

In hot humid afternoons,

Beach’s best air cooler!

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  • CHIPMUNK on Jun 5, 2011

    good writing

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Jun 5, 2011

    Cool pieces. Check the second haiku one more time.

  • Raj the Tora on Jun 5, 2011

    Sure Jimmy. Thanks Chip :)

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