A young man is smitten with love.

I have a hot date tonight.

Jenny’s beautiful and petite.

She walks on a cloud,

And her touch is so sweet.

She’s compassionate and caring.

She’s elegant and fair.

And she’s so confident and smart,

There’s no snobbery in the air.

One look at her smile

And you’re hooked for life.

I hope one day

That she’ll be my wife.

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Comments (5)
  • K.Reshma on Nov 15, 2009

    Lovely poem

  • Priyanka Bhowmick on Nov 15, 2009

    dats a good amount of confidence put down at the end…. sweet n lovely poem.

  • Ruby Hawk on Nov 15, 2009

    ohhh first love is so sweet.

  • Goodselfme on Nov 16, 2009

    Cute, light and soulfully penned. Your style is so refreshing. TX

  • LOVELYHONEY on Dec 9, 2009

    nice

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