A haiku about hot springs.

A wisp of steam rises,
From the pool, inviting ease,
And relaxation.
© 2011 Vic Jones

2
Liked it
Comments (4)
  • megamatt09 on Sep 28, 2011

    Good stuff.

  • CHIPMUNK on Sep 28, 2011

    Wow!! This sound so relaxing

  • Meg Smith on Sep 28, 2011

    Your poems are morning
    cups of steaming herbal tea
    lifting my spirits.

  • MMichaels on Sep 29, 2011

    nice share ^^

Leave a Comment

Hi there!

Hello! Welcome to Authspot, the spot for creative writing.
Read some stories and poems, and be sure to subscribe to our feed!

Find the Spot

Loading