May she have the strength to continue her fight for survival!

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She has potential,

But lurking under her skin is fear.

Fingernails with dirt under the nails,

Feet aching from neglect,

Motivation keeping her constantly running.

Tied up from not knowing if tomorrow will come,

From the west side to the east coast.

At times she feels like she is going on a downhill slide,

Setting her apart for she never loses faith,

Like no other she broadens her horizons.

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  • Marie Milton on Aug 20, 2009

    I think you should send this to the Head of State : ))
    We all write today in hope that it might help tomorrow : ))

  • alc on Aug 20, 2009

    Head of State huh!!! Girl your crazy!!!! I could picture myself going to the head of state with this I would get laughed out of the room!!!! lol

  • agriculi on Aug 20, 2009

    Going down hill is always easier than going up, perhaps she needs some help going up.

  • Tanya Wallace on Aug 20, 2009

    Ver creative and interesting write!

  • Atanacio on Aug 20, 2009

    wow this one was well done very well done

  • HelloSiti on Aug 21, 2009

    Nice poem and strong diction.

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