How could you use me like that?

How could you use me like that?
You heartless piece of crap!
Get out of my life!
Don’t come back!
No more pain and strife!
No more cutting you slack!!
Leave now!
You no-good ass!
You’re no longer wanted!
Good-bye forever.
No longer tainted!

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  • roberto sardelli on Aug 7, 2008

    very well worded, very powerful, well done I love it.
    though I have to say there are men that feel the same as you do.

  • illuminatiscott on Aug 7, 2008

    You tried to hard to find rhyming words, when non-rhyming words would have been more powerful.

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