How would I know?

Such a great feeling
So passionate… intensely pervasive,
Thought of sweet desire
Of warm caress and long wire

Endless happiness as it may seem
Eternity as promised and deemed
Bountiful grace and infinite blessing
A taste of once in a lifetime cheering

Sweet kisses and apprehending hugs,
Holding hands to hand numerous mugs
Charm and beauty intertwine
Exchanging vows of matrimonial rewind

An ultimate dream that is now on hand
Fortitude of new life that indeed reprimand
So fortunate that existence makes God command
A story of happy ending to fulfill and demand

That is what an individual feels
When loved by the one, much-loved …

But, how would I know?
If I was never been loved,
I was never been kissed; never been tapped.
All I know is that I’m in LOVE
I’m obsessed and drowned to a special cab
But it’s too impossible for me to be loved
To be cared and be touched by ever great knob
For in the beginning I don’t really know, “What is love?”
For I was never been in love with ME, who’s always on the rob

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  • Eric Mendoza on Oct 22, 2008

    Your poem is very passionate and heartfelt. Endless happiness as it may seem Eternity as promised and deemed. That\’s a classic line.

  • Rionel "2tet" Belen Caldo on Oct 23, 2008

    Thank you so much Eric for that oozing comment.

    Best regards and keep reading,

  • acecampillo on Oct 26, 2008

    I love your sense of poetry.
    I feel every word. It can be because I can relate..hehe

    God Bless You!

  • Rionel "2tet" Belen Caldo on Oct 26, 2008

    Hi Ace:

    Thanks for liking my piece…

    I have so many compositions of Pains about love…

    Try to read them all…

    Best regards and keep reading,

  • Johnny Yuma on Dec 14, 2008

    This is a great piece about love, and as they say if we don’t love ourselves we can’t expect anyone else too. Real love comes from the heart that much I know. I have been married the end of this month 38 years and am more in love than the day we got married.

    Damon/johnny yuma

  • 2tet on Dec 14, 2008

    Thank you so much… Mr. Johnny… Indeed, it was a great analysis…

  • sydnie on Jan 3, 2009

    hey this is true how does it feel to be loved by your lover

  • 2tet on Jan 5, 2009

    Indeed, that’s the question… and we need to know how does it?

  • Joie Schmidt on Feb 5, 2009

    One day you will meet the love of your life and it will be greater than you could ever imagine!



    -Liane Schmidt.

  • 2tet on Feb 6, 2009

    Thanks Ms. Liane… I hope someday I will…May it be…

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