Comments on: How Fast Can a Dragon Fly?

By: Palestrya

Palestrya — Wed, 11 May 2011 23:27:45 +0000

I like this poem! I like “free verse”! A person can do so many things with it. Thanks for sharing!

By: Carly

Carly — Wed, 05 Aug 2009 16:46:18 +0000

I love the description, and the words, but the rhythm is off to me. I know it’s free-verse, but I still say them in rythm, and this one doesn’t really have one for me. Maybe try to make more of a pattern in the *length* of the lines? Like, rather than long short long long long short medium long, some sort of pattern that makes it easier to read. You’re a fantastic poet – that’s the only suggestion I have. (:

By: CutestPrincess

CutestPrincess — Sat, 01 Aug 2009 16:53:23 +0000

what a wonderful poem…

By: Rebecca Ryals Russell

Rebecca Ryals Russell — Wed, 15 Jul 2009 17:50:36 +0000

Reminded me of the first ride Eragon took on Saphira.

By: lisa

lisa — Tue, 14 Jul 2009 02:39:32 +0000

I love this!

By: Ruby Hawk

Ruby Hawk — Sat, 11 Jul 2009 23:30:19 +0000

very nice,

By: sheba

sheba — Sat, 11 Jul 2009 22:20:09 +0000

Very good poem I liked it thanks for the read

By: Mystify

Mystify — Sat, 11 Jul 2009 22:19:23 +0000

wonderfully descriptive,creative poem.Very imaginative.Excellent work Milton.

By: Debra Mann

Debra Mann — Sat, 11 Jul 2009 18:23:09 +0000

Excellent poem and use of words adding some vivid imagery!

By: Darla Smith

Darla Smith — Sat, 11 Jul 2009 16:19:20 +0000

Great poem!