A desire, a thought to be along side with my loved one.


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How I really wished

How I wished so many friends
Hovered around me as well too
how much I wished I were with you
how I really wish for you
that all your wishes 

My dear come true
how I wish I were
Also along and near you.

When the time comes
if wishes were considered

To be like horses
how I wish I could ride
along and also besides you

Yes how I wish my love,

You were of my age
we could together then stage
the desires we both do commonly share
how I wish I was, once just once
with you my desired one,

 Ah! Along with you there

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  • cardy on Sep 21, 2009

    A longing wish nice work.

  • Aldrin A Wilding West on Sep 21, 2009

    We are all allowed to wish or maybe even make believe sometimes….aren’t we?

  • giftarist on Sep 21, 2009

    Nicely done!

  • papaleng on Sep 21, 2009

    wishes are free
    and so are realities
    Hope that a day will be given for you and me
    for flying horses to glide us to lands and vast seas.

  • Darla Cooke on Sep 21, 2009

    Nice poem.

  • Tim P Stavert on Sep 21, 2009

    Your wish will one day come true,
    when you least expect it,
    it will come out of the blue.

    Nice sensual poem LH

    Kind regards

    Tim

  • Judi Eddy on Sep 21, 2009

    This is a nice piece of work.. Your thinking must be very near to mine. .Judi xx

  • Marie Milton on Sep 21, 2009

    Another great piece of writing Honey…keep ‘em coming :)

  • Emma Green on Sep 21, 2009

    Another great piece of writing!

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