How I Wish

jaysonv on Jan 11, 2010

Tags: How I Wish, love, love poem, poem, Wish Fulfillment

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A poem about man who wishes to be love by the woman she loved.

Image by jaysonv

How I wish I am your blanket as I can protect you from cold nights.

How I wish I am your shoes as I can be with you wherever you go.

How I wish I am your soldier as I can defend you from danger.

How I wish I am your hankie as I can wipe away all your tears.

How I wish I am your clown as I can alter these tears into laughter.

How I wish I am yours as I can do these wishes for you.

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Comments (54)

Inna Tysoe on Jan 11, 2010
Very romantic.

Inna
bluray on Jan 11, 2010
Good one..
LoveDoctor on Jan 11, 2010
Very creative and well-written.
joanne721 on Jan 11, 2010
how i wish too jayson:) to find a man like that.hahaha
Anuradha Ramkumar on Jan 11, 2010
Nice one.
Frances Lawrence on Jan 11, 2010
Lovely words,
emanuele522 on Jan 11, 2010
nice post gives me new ideals for next articles thanks.
magicdarts on Jan 11, 2010
a sense of longing beautifully captured
Priyanka Bhowmick on Jan 11, 2010
thats a sweet romantic poem…well written…
Darla Cooke on Jan 11, 2010
Lovely poem!
jaysonv on Jan 11, 2010
thankz for all ur compliments..
Will Dee on Jan 11, 2010
A beautiful poetic message.
albert1jemi on Jan 11, 2010
beautiful words great poem
Atanacio on Jan 11, 2010
Jason, very poetic write
ladydryle on Jan 11, 2010
Whoah….wow…very romantic,really.
ReggieLutz on Jan 11, 2010
thanks for the share
jaysonv on Jan 11, 2010
your welcome ReggieLutz..
alc on Jan 11, 2010
thanks for a terrific share!
LewSethics on Jan 11, 2010
nice one jason
Greg Seltz on Jan 11, 2010
I like it…
8Shei8 on Jan 11, 2010
Awww! This is so romantic and touching.
Videomark on Jan 11, 2010
A very good poem.
amilia snow on Jan 11, 2010
sweet sentiments and dedication.
mo hoyal on Jan 11, 2010
this is very beautiful and it would be so great to be loved in the way you have just described!
Happy new year Jayson!
coolbryan on Jan 11, 2010
so good and very awesome
Eunice Tan on Jan 12, 2010
So sweet and romantic.
Linda Lori on Jan 12, 2010
Lovingly adorable!
Kris Tagre on Jan 12, 2010
wow…i love this. The pain of unrequited love is undeniable indeed
papaleng on Jan 12, 2010
sweet and romantic sentiments, Iba na ang in-love..
AlmaG on Jan 12, 2010
That’s very sweet Jason
jaysonv on Jan 12, 2010
thank you so much guys for all the compliments..
Yalonda on Jan 12, 2010
This is beautiful! A very sweet poem!
The Character on Jan 12, 2010
Dear jaysonv,

You’re a sweet talker, written with taste.

Sincerely,

The Character
tonywriter on Jan 13, 2010
very sweet and amazing!Thanx!
jaysonv on Jan 13, 2010
thank you guys..
qasimdharamsy on Jan 13, 2010
Amazing….I like it…
LOVELYHONEY on Jan 13, 2010
HOW I WISH I WAS ABIT YOUNGER AND WITH U LOVELY LH
devsir on Jan 15, 2010
How I wish I could be with you to say “Great Work” “Keep It Up”

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joyhyena29 on Jan 15, 2010
very nice…keep it up^^
Rebecca Anne Grant on Jan 16, 2010
A very touching poem! It made me think.
jaysonv on Jan 17, 2010
thank you guys for all the compliments..
standingproud on Jan 17, 2010
I like your heart Jayson.
This is just lovely
AlmaG on Jan 18, 2010
Revisiting! … still loving this poem
Antonette Ramos on Jan 18, 2010
sweeeeeeeeeeeeet:))))
jaysonv on Jan 18, 2010
thankz alma..
upeshdaa on Jan 19, 2010
very nice.
adlan92 on Jan 20, 2010
that’s so sweet, haha
cutedrishti8 on Jan 20, 2010
Wonderful piece
jaysonv on Jan 21, 2010
Thanks a lot guys..
Sushant94 on Jan 22, 2010
cool!
jaysonv on Jan 22, 2010
thankz..
lillyrose on Jan 23, 2010
very romantic and passionate!
Tulan on Jan 30, 2010
cool!!
Dodi Iswandi Mauliawan on Feb 15, 2010
just like me!

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