A poem.

two red hummingbirds

look as though they’re pushing and

shoving

for their meal.

One makes a shrill noise

as the other tries to get

to the red feeder.

I watch from inside

neither gets the substance…

quickly,

they zoom

away.

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  • Lee Altman on May 26, 2009

    nice

  • 101 on Jun 2, 2009

    Melisa,great read and great visual you bring the humming birds to my front yard.really enjoyable read!!always,Gary La Buda

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