Hums

Milton H Peebles III on Oct 5, 2011

Tags: bats, candy, cats, costume, creepy, creepy tune, hag, halloween, hum, Humming, trick-or-treat, tune

On Halloween, some houses are creepier than others.

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Hums

3 October 2011

hhmmmmmm
The old lady hums a creepy tune
Upon her porch she wreaks of death and gloom
I stand there looking in my candy bag
How can I go up to this old hag?

hhmmmmmm
The old lady hums a creepy tune
All the cats have come to sit and groom
Old lady on a porch full of black cats
Oh I bet there will soon come some bats

hhmmmmmm
The old lady hums a creepy tune
I now walk up on the porch to my doom
I open up my big candy bag
To my dread she opens up her own big bag

hhmmmmmm
The old lady hums a creepy tune
Oh I wish I could run away like zoom!
The she smiles and fills my candy bag
Ha Ha, she’s just a girl, not an old creepy hag
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FX777222999 on Oct 5, 2011
The rhyming is perfect to each line, and, the overall construction is great.
Christine Ramsay on Oct 5, 2011
You had me going there. A very enjoyable piece, Milton.
beingwell on Oct 6, 2011
Another one of yours, from SU.

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