Hunger Drives

Milton H Peebles III on Jan 5, 2009

Tags: eating, hunger, working

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I was thinking of writing something creepy. But this came out instead.

Grumbling growling
Come out prowling
Hunger drives

Snarling darling
Wake up wanting
Hunger drives

Smelling sniffing
Food is cooking
Hunger drives

Chomping eating
Breakfast disappearing
Hunger drives

Tilling toiling
Food is growing
Hunger drives

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Comments (8)

Debra. on Jan 5, 2009
And it came out very well! I love it, Milton. My friend you have done it again! Congrats!

God bless.
Christine Ramsay on Jan 5, 2009
Another great one. Thanks for sharing.

Christine
Morgana on Jan 5, 2009
I like it. You are right, it didn’t come out scary but it did sound very cuuuuuuuuttttttee. I like it very much.
Darla Smith on Jan 5, 2009
I really like this one a lot!
Alicia Wind on Jan 5, 2009
Hunger always crave …! Nice one…
myria on Jan 5, 2009
Great work once again! I like it!
lisa on Jan 5, 2009
i like this! It makes me giggle plus i’m hungry now.
Palestrya on Mar 22, 2011
I like it. Hunger drives alot of things throughout the day.

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