This is a short two minute poem I randomly thought up.

As blackness falls in

The beast’s day is on

Leaving all its kin

Soon all sound is gone

 

My hand feels so week

Though I know it has power

A deadly power to reek

As behind bushes, I cower

 

We both have one chance

All it takes is a glance

I am ending this dance

With this shot’s kind romance

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Comments (4)
  • raptor22 on Oct 8, 2009

    Not a bad effort. Keep writing.

  • Bo Russo on Oct 8, 2009

    Better than I was expecting and kind of funny at the end.

  • The Cinders on Oct 16, 2009

    I liked it, very creative.
    Bria.

  • diamondpoet on Oct 25, 2009

    Very nice!

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