About women being under a man’s control. It reflects our emotions and what we can endure when we don’t stand up for ourselves.

In a daze
Confusion’s haze
Abandoned heart
Soul ripped apart
Liar’s tongue
A puppet strung
Body scorned
Pitiful life mourned
Finally, I realized

I was hypnotized

1
Liked it
Comments (2)
  • Sandra Hedin on Dec 21, 2008

    I know that feeling all too well!

  • Debra O- on Dec 22, 2008

    Well writtien, but I was a bit confused!! Whats going on???

Leave a Comment

Hi there!

Hello! Welcome to Authspot, the spot for creative writing.
Read some stories and poems, and be sure to subscribe to our feed!

Find the Spot

Loading