Hypocritical

dino renaldo on Nov 8, 2010

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Just POEM…………

spotty rain ………..
sounded so beautiful
like a symphony
heard from a distance

wind blows …….
tree and leaf rub
like the sound of guitar melody, that inspires the soul
getting closer

I look so bored
to take a piece of paper and write
write all the feelings
about what is seen and felt

try to smile
to the world and everything
My lips opened his mouth closed seizures

this is life
life is full of hypocrisy
filled with a bunch of hypocritical human
who always want to be understood

Dino Renaldo

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Comments (16)

lapasan on Nov 8, 2010
nice poem!
CHIPMUNK on Nov 8, 2010
good one
albert1jemi on Nov 8, 2010
great share
lillyrose on Nov 8, 2010
loved this line…
sounded so beautiful
like a symphony
heard from a distance
ladym33 on Nov 8, 2010
So good and so true.
PSingh1990 on Nov 8, 2010
Nice Share.
PARAM on Nov 8, 2010
Nice one….

thanks for share.
Jane Campbell on Nov 9, 2010
That’s a beautiful verse!! Thank you. You’re very talented!!
dak on Nov 10, 2010
A wonderfully written poem.
cuddlypoo on Nov 16, 2010
Profound. I have nothing else to say.
dewi monika on Jun 24, 2011
nice post, keep sharing
bonita bona on Jun 24, 2011
This is very nice share, I like it. Thanks
sari monika on Jun 24, 2011
excellent write my friend
meri tania on Jun 24, 2011
good post..i like it
nori nora on Jun 25, 2011
nice….post.!!
abba novita on Jun 25, 2011
i like it.good

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