I Am a River….( Haiku)

girishpuri on Feb 1, 2012

Tags: River, stone

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If You Are MOVING Never Bother For The WAY…..

I AM A FLOWING RIVER ….

I SHALL MAKE MY WAY….

BUT DEAR STONE ,

PLEASE TELL ME ,

WHICH WAY YOU WANT TO GO……….

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Comments (15)

Saurav Banerjee on Feb 1, 2012
Philosophical!!!
mdrkarim7 on Feb 1, 2012
Lovely and natural…
AmosTheCat on Feb 1, 2012
Nice of the river to ask. I like it.
Safa on Feb 1, 2012
wow. wish I could go to that place. very nice
lapasan on Feb 1, 2012
Nice piece.
Aroosa Gloomy on Feb 1, 2012
wana head towards never ending sea
realityspeaks on Feb 1, 2012
Beautiful…
Martin Kloess on Feb 1, 2012
interesting
Marquis de Joker on Feb 1, 2012
Rock bottom… first thought that came to mind
avissado on Feb 2, 2012
the poem is nice but sorry it’s not haiku
Inna Tysoe on Feb 3, 2012
Good one
girishpuri on Feb 3, 2012
thanks all
Angelji on Feb 4, 2012
Moving..love this..
Moses Ingram on Feb 4, 2012
All rivers flow towards the ocean.
Lady Sunshine on Feb 16, 2012
Not good.

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