I am a shooting star.

I made a mistake,
I chased a glow,
I trusted a thousand traitors
I detoxified thousand dealers.

There were those who sold hopes and illusions,
and raw truth about resignation
I between earth and sky are a shooting star,
running from God to reach the loser,
part from the whole to arrive at anything,
and become part of private clients.

I fell,
but I have not lost
wandering among the clouds, I landed among many people,
without exemption for each phase a minimum of hesitation.

I have called,
and then slowly I have launched,
with the force of a thunderbolt to the clear sky,
with the enormity of an alien,
flowing joy and fear,
thrown against a thousand walls.

No matter if some pieces came off,
my trip was completed …

I am a shooting star,
I found the winner in defeat,
nothing in the whole unconscious
even the earth has its Almighty.

I learned to look for paradise,
and found a smile,
I tried the constellation and its glow,
and found in the human love,
I tried the fickle moon,
and I was a pain but compatible.

I am a star that is not going to fall down,
but not stop to shine more
fall to go up,
frightened by the big jump,
yet always the star,
beautiful … remains the same.

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  • LOVELYHONEY on Jul 6, 2010

    YES U R A STAR UNDOUBTEDLY LOVELY poetry lovely lovely lovely

    the Lord bless you

    and
    fulfill your worldly desire

    let Ur angel
    come and kneel before thee
    to night
    and vie for thy hand….
    and then happily
    I shall take my flight
    to that far off
    unknown promised land
    may the Lord!!!
    Light this
    poem
    hand in hand…….

  • wonder on Jul 6, 2010

    A positive note, fantastic!

  • ShadowPsychos on Jul 6, 2010

    great piece absolutely loved it :) well done

  • aman259 on Jul 6, 2010

    great share! thanks! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

  • sunnyiam on Jul 6, 2010

    very nice poem…

  • LoveDoctor on Jul 6, 2010

    You are a star! Loved this poem.

  • Idlepen on Jul 6, 2010

    I love your poems my “star”!!! Thanks.

  • hollysoholly on Jul 6, 2010

    Lovely poem. Thanks for sharing.

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Jul 6, 2010

    Simply beautiful.

  • Tulan on Jul 6, 2010

    A positive attitude is always a good thing.

  • giftarist on Jul 6, 2010

    You’re undoubtedly a great poet friend.

  • Likha on Jul 8, 2010

    Wow!

  • Stotinka5 on Jul 15, 2010

    you are a ”poetry star” :P

  • Krupali on Jul 17, 2010

    You’re our greatest Triond Star

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