I Am Alone..

edwardjoy on Jun 26, 2010

I am alone….I feel sad.

I am alone, I am alone and I am alone….

From the day I decided to move,

To another country for money,

I miss my lover, my wife, my honey,

It’s a bad feeling I can say

Given another chance I will never go away….

I am alone, I am alone and I am alone….

I am filled with sorrow and full of pain,

My distance is someone else’s gain,

She fell for a childhood friend,

And broke the loyal family trend

I am alone, I am alone and I am alone….

I don’t say a word, I bear the sorrow

I will give her all the happiness

Even from friends if I can borrow,

I want to see her happy all the time

This will make me always feel fine.

I am alone, I am alone and I am alone….

But why me all the time

Love plays the role of a soundless chime

I can’t share my feelings anywhere

I have no friend who would lovingly care

I feel dejected and in nights I cry

Sometimes I feel best is to die.

****Edward Rodrigues****

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Comments (9)

wonder on Jun 26, 2010
A feeling portrayed very well.
TwiKnight on Jun 26, 2010
I’m sure what you’re feeling right now would soon pass… great write, by the way.
emmy19 on Jun 26, 2010
Thanks for this lovely sharing. Don’t worry I am with you
swity on Jun 26, 2010
Nice poem…pain personified
Emmie on Jun 26, 2010
Once again i really could feel the meaning behind it and the pain. Such a good write.

Emmie
V rank on Jun 26, 2010
I could almost feel the pain you have when you wrote this…
sasuke191 on Jun 28, 2010
This poem is very touching as it kind of shows real feelings… It is easy for one reading to get into the character.. Well done!.. ^^
RAJEEV BHARGAVA on Jun 28, 2010
an intense poem full of depth and emotion. please never feel you are alone or talk about dying. behold the animals and plants around you. look at snow white. she felt scared in the woods until she met the squirrels and the birds. the dwarfs helped out too. this is a lovely poem, and we are all with you.
LOVELYHONEY on Jun 28, 2010
Yul Bryner once said

MAN IS BORN LIVES AND DIES ALONE

So you went dear Rodrigues ,
in search of wealth
Gautama Budha too
left his wife in search of peace ,

we all have to sacrifice
if we want to achieve.
so take life in your own way
do what you want
I say
but then never regret it
that;s the only happiest
and successful life’ s way

Hi there!