Hello All,

I’m interested if you think this is better as a song or as a poem. Additionally, which do you like better, my version or the original version by Simon and Garfunkel? Responses to these questions or
any feedback would be very much appreciated.

Thanks for reading,

-Resounding Glass

Interesting! Hm…I honestly haven’t heard the original version, but your piece was an interesting read. (Not very helpful, I know, and I’m sorry about that.)

It’s probably better as a…song, mostly because of your format- that and I could hear a slow folk song going on in my head.

Nice piece though, seriously- I honestly couldn’t say which one I like better (as I haven’t heard the original), nice job!

-Fresh Writing

I’d love it as a song. I could hear it on the radio with great background music. I like it right now as a poem. Thanks for sharing.

Wow….there’s a lot of pain behind this. Well done though.

Strong emotions Glass. I would love to hear this piece as a song!

-manya

Beautifully spoken, I think sometimes people think this but won’t say it, truly awesome!!

I think it makes a better song.
Can’t really compare to S&G, as I’m biased toward them: if I were to hear your piece sung, all that could change!
Very nice.
Thanks,
Clay

song! I can almost hear it.. ! love it..