I know in one way or the other you may have experience this or about to have your own share in this drama.

It was a good day for me

A day so blessed and lively

I had to pay her a visit because she needed my help.

It was a risky task because I traveled a long distance

To visit her and at night too.

I called her on phone as I reached her school

And immediately she rushed out of her hostel to meet me.

It was a fun moment as we hugged for the first time.

As if it were over, we kissed!

Yes, she kissed my lips dry.

Till now I still feel that even after washing severally.

I am blessed I am engaged!

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  • ageeinc on May 17, 2010

    I liked this alot. Good work!

  • Atanacio on May 17, 2010

    a very good write happy times :)

  • babygirl3605 on May 17, 2010

    Congrats

  • Night Story on May 17, 2010

    Cool.

  • diamondpoet on May 17, 2010

    I am so happy for you when will I receive my wedding invitation.

  • sara20 on May 17, 2010

    Nice to read this piece.

    Keep writing more about it. It is really gracefully and very well written skill.

    Thanks for sharing.

    Cheers.

    Sara:

  • Videomark on May 17, 2010

    A big congratulations.

  • clay hurtubise on May 17, 2010

    Cute piece.
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • Joie Schmidt on May 17, 2010

    Congratulations!!

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • Jamie Myles on May 18, 2010

    wonderful post. Full of joy and sweetness.

  • Anuradha Ramkumar on May 18, 2010

    Congrats! Where is the wedding invitation?

  • Christine Ramsay on May 18, 2010

    A very romantic piece. Congratulations on the engagement.

    Christine

  • Jimmy Shilaho on May 18, 2010

    Congratulations brother.

  • Michael Eboh on May 18, 2010

    Thanks for sharing my feelings…..
    I love you all!

  • neha80 on May 19, 2010

    Interesting Piece.

    Today I know more about it. Good subject selection for writing article.

    Thanks for sharing good one.

    Anjal….!!!

  • SharifaMcFarlane on May 21, 2010

    That must have been some kiss Michael.
    Congrats!

  • patampar on May 24, 2010

    nice and good

  • fragile18 on May 24, 2010

    congratulations! :)

  • jammaekas on May 24, 2010

    wow! this is lovely.congratulations!

  • fishfry aka Elizabeth Figueroa on May 25, 2010

    Congrats and good luck, your about to travel a beautiful road.
    You have written about something so beautifully in an lovely manner

  • Darlene McFarlane on May 30, 2010

    This is a very happy time. Congratulations. I wish you both the best.

  • pattiann on Jun 7, 2010

    Good poem! Congratulations on getting engaged, and I hope you have a happy marriage like mine which is wonderful even though we’ll be married 46 years this November.

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