An original poem.

An:
opalescent ventilation
breathed through
narrow nostil

Will:
seek to
find sensations
more open
to discussion.

For:
 pinched thin
the vein protrudes,
threatening
to burst.

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  • Ubel Ein on Mar 20, 2011

    Unique, …and I definitely like it.

  • Ninja Kiwi on Apr 30, 2011

    You have a brilliant way with words. I look forward to reading more of your work.

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