Sometimes life can be harsh and you have to find ways to deal with it!

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Greeted by gluttony,

Hated with hope,

Scorched by serenity,

Marinated in misery,

F**ked by fate,

Drowned with desire,

Tortured with tainted memories,

I should be dead,

Waiting for my day to come,

Feel my pain.

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  • Sexyhood03 on Oct 30, 2009

    Nice.

  • Sourav on Oct 30, 2009

    Good one!

  • cutedrishti8 on Oct 30, 2009

    Great work..

  • Darla Smith on Oct 30, 2009

    Very nice poem.

  • Mystify on Oct 30, 2009

    Great work Alc,you have my like!

  • Liz Sapphire on Oct 30, 2009

    I feel your pain… very nice poem!

  • maranatha on Oct 30, 2009

    I do feel your pain – now I want to see another poem; a mirror to this one, with all the good and fine things you can think of in this old world!

  • sandie on Oct 30, 2009

    nice poem, hope the pain disappears.

  • larry84 on Oct 30, 2009

    another good one babe

  • paperchaser on Oct 31, 2009

    donno where da pic is frm, but i have seen such pic’s in elephanta caves in mumbai

  • mishee on Oct 31, 2009

    great :)

  • historigal on Oct 31, 2009

    Intense words. Very nice poem.

  • martinpm on Oct 31, 2009

    Nice poem and well expressed.

  • giftarist on Nov 1, 2009

    Nice!

  • Marie Antoinette on Nov 2, 2009

    Your poetry is very strong and saturated with emotion, fast paced and entangles the senses.

  • Dessian on Nov 2, 2009

    great wording, I loved this piece

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