I found a picture I took.

i am happy with glee

i remember being there

there was moisture in the air

the colors popping around me

the breeze was a little warm

just enough to embrace me

i took a picture to hold the moment

and a small section of the time

fountains dripping water

trees swaying in the breeze

by just looking at the picture

that i now hold in time

a story comes alive

it has been such a long time

that i have wanted to paint

not draw but paint

there is a difference to me

i so grateful for this moment

that i hold in my mind

& hold in my hand

this beautiful moment

where sands stopped in time

and there was no music

but the sounds sweetly chimed

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Comments (16)
  • tankermone on Oct 15, 2010

    Happy sounds!

  • rebell115 on Oct 15, 2010

    as usally you right another good poem, keep up the good works :)

  • Luna Morena on Oct 15, 2010

    Beautiful poem

  • Raj the Tora on Oct 15, 2010

    wonderful poetry

  • giftarist on Oct 15, 2010

    Nice imagery. Good piece, friend.

  • awesome11 on Oct 15, 2010

    Wonderful poem written

  • GodsGrace on Oct 15, 2010

    Very Good Poem

  • Ranjan Mathews on Oct 16, 2010

    Sounds of Silence
    Chiming in brilliance.

  • Rehoboth on Oct 16, 2010

    $- nice-$

  • JoeLopy on Oct 16, 2010

    Wonderful poem.

  • Phoenix Montoya on Oct 16, 2010

    Lovely write. Thanks.

  • drelayaraja on Oct 16, 2010

    Very good poem…

  • Ruby Hawk on Oct 16, 2010

    Beautifully said,

  • Starpisces on Oct 16, 2010

    a nice poem. Yes, sometimes looking back at photographs bring back great memory and we suddenly become sentimental within seconds…. like now, a good poem is composed.

  • Cloudydays on Oct 16, 2010

    So Visually Appealing!

  • sandcastle on Oct 29, 2010

    Looove it!

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