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I Am Like a Monkey (Dancing in The Trees)

Wrath Warbone on Feb 2, 2012
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What am I like?

I am like a monkey 

Dancing in the trees

With my pants pulled down

All around  my knees

Chasing all the butterflies

And hoping I don’t sneeze

The Dancing Tree (Photo credit: Lauren Manning)

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  • Dora77 on Feb 2, 2012

    Dear Wrath Warbone,

    Indeed its an honor to comment first on such a lovely poem.
    I was wondering if i can frame a Nursery Rhyme on it.
    Thank you so much!

  • sanataryal on Feb 2, 2012

    Wrath, it’s lively. We have to learn to live like this is the last chance to live.

  • sheilanewton on Feb 2, 2012

    I hope you don’t sneeze either!!!

  • Wrath Warbone on Feb 2, 2012

    Thanks, Dora77 and sanataryal. Please, Dora77, do whatever you like with this poem. Thanks for the very kind words.

  • Audrey Howitt on Feb 2, 2012

    Clever write! I enjoyed it a bunch!

  • KittyK on Feb 2, 2012

    This made me laugh out loud….

  • Wrath Warbone on Feb 2, 2012

    Thanks, KittyK, sheilanewton and Audrey Howitt. Great to see your comments.

  • Angelji on Feb 2, 2012

    so cool..

  • LoveDoctor on Feb 3, 2012

    I love it. This is so playful.

  • LadyElena on Feb 3, 2012

    Very funny and lively read.

  • Lisa Marie Mottert on Feb 3, 2012

    Cute poem…
    Thanks, for the share!

  • Margaret Boseroy on Feb 3, 2012

    …or freeze! Very fun poem. :-)

  • Margaret Boseroy on Feb 3, 2012

    …or freeze! Very fun poem. :-)

  • Thell Stars on Feb 4, 2012

    nice article

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