I even engage in duels with my family members for the cause of her, because I am mad after her.

She is stunningly beautiful,
She is mesmerizing,
She is so colorful,
She is so charming,
She is short, others even comment upon her as
She is a dwarf, but I don’ mind,
I am mad after her
For I have paid a heavy price for her,
I cherish her softness,
I adore her fragrance,
I like her freshness,
I will not forsake her
Because she is my darling,
I am her dude,
I even engage in duels
With my family members
For the cause of her,
She cannot speak,
She cannot walk,
Still I am mad after her,
I am ready to pay any price,
For her smile,
That she radiates through her petals,
She is the heroine of our garden,
What others call her as rose,
But to me,
She is my angel!

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  • rajeev bhargava on Jun 13, 2009

    a beautiful poem about your true love for a flower. you are indeed a kind and loving soul to fall in love with its personality. everything on our planet has a soul and life within. i really love this poem alot. i also feel the same for animals and plants. they feel pain and emote feelings just like those among us who act and behave like humans. SUPERB!!!

  • ken bultman on Jun 13, 2009

    Go for it. I don’t know your love but I believe she is as beautiful as you say. Bless you both.

  • Ramalingam on Jun 13, 2009

    Thanks a lot for your comments.A tender heart alone can understand the tenderness in others.Thanks for your appreciation.

  • Pinaki Ghosh on Jun 13, 2009

    Nice poem. A great way of expression. It has a superb climactic order of arrangement until the very last line of the poem. Very very dramatic. The photo is also nice. Thanks.

  • Ramalingam on Jun 13, 2009

    Thanks for your inspiring comments Ghosh.

  • Christine Ramsay on Jun 14, 2009

    I fully understand your love for your rose. I often feel like that about a beautiful flower. A lovely piece.

    Christine

  • richard reed on Jun 14, 2009

    great write,,,thanks for the share..Rich

  • Darla Cooke on Jun 14, 2009

    Lovely poem!

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Jun 14, 2009

    This poem is beautiful. You truly have your feeling expressed among the words, and they became alive under your nice description. Give you “liked it”

  • chitragopi on Jun 14, 2009

    A rose deserves to be loved. Beautiful poem.

  • Sheila M on Jun 14, 2009

    Must be a most beautiful flower!

  • Ruby Hawk on Jun 14, 2009

    Roses are my favorites too. I miss my roses but I don’t miss the yard work since I now live in an apartment.

  • stumbleuponwriter on Jun 14, 2009

    Very talented .. I like this poem very much..

  • Daisy Peasblossom on Jun 14, 2009

    What fun! I enjoyed the word game here.

  • CutestPrincess on Jun 18, 2009

    why, is this true to life? she’s so lucky to have you, you’re ready to fight for her, i wonder how beautiful and charming she is…

  • irishpen on Jul 13, 2009

    Beautiful~~

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