I Am Not a Crook

Ethics0006 on Oct 14, 2010

Tags: crook, Hook, I am not a Crook, mate, poem, Poetry, spoof, water proof

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I am giving a message to my friend.

My heart is beating hook

Please allow me to took

Don’t worry, I am not a crook

But for you, I am ready to become a cook

Truth is seen in my eyes please look

These lines are not taken from any book

One thing I want to spoof

I will protect you every time like a bullet proof

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Comments (33)

Irishmick on Oct 14, 2010
You’re one of the few,,the world is full of crooks.
Pam Stushnoff on Oct 14, 2010
Nicely done.
albert1jemi on Oct 14, 2010
good one
Saurav Banerjee on Oct 14, 2010
Fine post.
rajeev bhargava on Oct 14, 2010
a very well composed poem which i enjoyed very much, thanks for sharing.
Adrn0919 on Oct 14, 2010
Very nice poem. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you.
vijayanths on Oct 14, 2010
good poem, liked it.
GodsGrace on Oct 14, 2010
This is very fantastic read for me

Keep it up
Melinda J on Oct 14, 2010
SuperMember on Oct 14, 2010
Great share.
Eric Damato on Oct 14, 2010
this made me laugh a bit, well written
The Soul Explorer on Oct 14, 2010
Hahaha! Nice one! Liked it!
carissimi on Oct 15, 2010
i wish i had someone that would protect me.. great write..
rafihan on Oct 15, 2010
nice poem…
Noeal V on Oct 15, 2010
Nice Share.
R.Laws on Oct 15, 2010
Well-written poem! Nice share my friend!
Kaye TM on Oct 15, 2010
great rhyming. =p
LCM Linda on Oct 16, 2010
Nice sweet poem. Thanks for sharing.
kiran8 on Oct 17, 2010
Nice poem !
Mr Ghaz on Oct 17, 2010
lovely and very attractive poem. like it
Ruby Hawk on Oct 18, 2010
Well done.
yes me on Oct 20, 2010
nice lines cheers
meandu on Oct 25, 2010
Nice share!
Ima Vee on Oct 26, 2010
fantastic rhyming…
Ann Yo on Oct 27, 2010
Interesting poem, thanks!
Ukrainian on Nov 12, 2010
Great poem!
bhaswati on Dec 29, 2010
i am sure the message was loud and clear, my friend!
netview132 on Dec 29, 2010
That was very nice.
Nic Barce on Dec 29, 2010
cool
sanjay91422 on Dec 29, 2010
Yes you are not crook.
arjun on Dec 29, 2010
very good poem. I enjoy it.
rappeter13 on Aug 19, 2011
Interesting poem, with unique rhyme.
massimo2020 on Oct 23, 2011
I like it! Keep on with the writing!

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