I Am Still Alive

drelayaraja on Nov 18, 2009

Tags: alive, autmn, cloud, drelayaraja, elayaraja, happy, sky, songs, wind

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Happy to be in this world for some reasons.

I AM STILL ALIVE…

I am still alive,

To see the moon of cloudless sky,

To hear the songs of birds that fly,

To feel the pleasure of autumn winds,

To smell the scent of love she sends,

…And to brief you my beginnings and ends.

© 2009 Dr.P.Elayaraja

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Comments (18)

Hansika on Nov 18, 2009
nice one
wonder on Nov 18, 2009
Not many are alive, great message.
K.Reshma on Nov 18, 2009
very nice
svishnugopal on Nov 18, 2009
wonderful write
Christine Ramsay on Nov 18, 2009
I like the way you have turned your last poem around. Lovely work.

Christine
Lady Sunshine on Nov 18, 2009
Very nice piece.
Teves on Nov 18, 2009
I am happy you are still alive…Nice written.
AlmaG on Nov 18, 2009
It’s a blessing that we all are alive to experience life’s joys and precious moments
Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Nov 18, 2009
“That’s really a good poem, short,sweet and to the point”
Jane Jane on Nov 18, 2009
nice piece. I’m still alive too.
Frances Lawrence on Nov 19, 2009
A beautiful piece of writing.
LOVELYHONEY on Nov 19, 2009
glad r still
lovely
T. S. Lewis on Nov 19, 2009
You really show your talent. Nicely done.
richardpeeej on Nov 19, 2009
Its nice to be alive-you can’t beat it!
Kristie Leong MD on Nov 19, 2009
A lovely poem. Very nicely done.
Tanya Wallace on Nov 19, 2009
Lovely poem with some very nice imagery in your wording! We should all appreciate each day we are given and make the most of it. Fab work!
Jenny Heart on Nov 22, 2009
Every moment is a gift of a blessing. Great one!
Linda Lori on Nov 25, 2009
and it’s great to be alive!! =) Nice work!

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