This is just interim to keep you going… The passionate one is in the making… This is the reality form but not my area of expertise as it strips me bare….

Here I am, the one that you love,

Searching for another chance.

She comes to you dressed in love,

For the most passionate dance.

But to go is but the key,

For you tell her about the shower,

She works the night and cannot come,

To the bee to explore the flower.

The day is young and I can come,

If you show me the way.

I have so much to give, thats all I’ll say,

Tell me the place, I pray.

I am off today, this very hour,

And I need you NOW.

Will you party on my dancefloor,

In rhythm with me somehow???

I am the one, the one that you love,

I need those moves right now.

Look no further for its time,

For me to say yes, to you.

But WHERE???

 

By Anisha Achankunju (C) 15th November 2010

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  • Kopykween on Nov 15, 2010

    Its a wonderfully passionate piece. I wonder where the next one takes us?

  • Souldose on Nov 15, 2010

    You’ve made me curious to see the one in the making, beautiful poem… You really know how to write romance and take us on a beautiful mesmerising journey

  • albert1jemi on Nov 15, 2010

    wonderful poem

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