A second poem I had given my then-boyfriend-now-husband.

You are the colour, I am the beige

You are the anger, I am the rage

You are the pay, I am the wage

You are the bird, I am the cage.

You are the throne, I am the sire

You are the burn, I am the fire

You are the lie, I am the liar

You are the wish, I am desire.

I am the bill, you are the check

I am the head, you are the neck

I am the mess, you are the wreck

I am the Fiona, you are the Shrek.

I am the air, you are the fan

I am the water, you are the can

I am the fry, you are the pan

I am the lady, you are the man!

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  • Aiswarya T Anish on Jun 30, 2010

    nice….

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Jun 30, 2010

    This must have made him laugh.

  • NIYATI BHAT on Jun 30, 2010

    Loved it Loved it and Loved it..now I know how ur boyfriend became ur husband…he must have been smitten by ur poetry ; )

  • poornima on Jun 30, 2010

    i am fiona u r shrek :) mahesh shrek…. hhahahah…..

  • ranjitha shetty on Jul 1, 2010

    gud one poo:) mahesh must hv been really impressed wid tis:)

  • K V Venkataramana on Jul 4, 2010

    Your poem makes an interesting reading. Being the air, you help rotate the fan. Nice imagery.

  • MiRceA 01 on Jul 8, 2010

    good work

  • Ruby Hawk on Jul 9, 2010

    very nice work.

  • 1hopefulman on Jul 30, 2010

    Great!

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