A poem about a woman’s feelings when she met a man for the first time. Type in quotes signifies his spoken words.

You came into my life unexpectedly.

You stepped out of your car at dusk.

Impressed.

You’re strong, fit.

You had a smile I’ll never forget.

You were kind and gentle.

Comfortable.

Relaxed.

Safe.

Your kiss was sensual and passionate.

Amazed.

Impressed.

Your eyes hide a story that you cannot yet tell.

Intrigued.

“What do you want from me?”

A friend.

“I can be that.”

Someone to talk to.

“I can be that.”

Someone to spend quality time with.

“I can be that.”

Someone to be supportive of me.

“I can be that.”

Someone to make me feel good.

“I can be that.”

“You seem to have a lot of male friends.”

I did not want you to be that.

 

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  • jimbob1 on Jul 13, 2010

    AGG…a great poem with a not so subtle concluding message…this is the first of your work that I have read…looking forward to reading more. I voted that I like it because it is a great poem and deserving of an I Like It vote from everyone who reads it…thanks for the write and read…

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