A girl of my imagination years gone by steals my fascination and returns as an incarnation.


I can’t forget her

 

I still can’t forget her

She comes in my dreams daily

She loves others more

That I can see

But she hasn’t yet removed me

I know that

She will come back to me

 

But then perhaps it ‘l be too late

I shall be at my burial gate

She will then be smiling at me

Full of happiness and with glee

But as long as she is smiling at me

That’ll itself make me happy

Ere I enter the funeral hall

I shall wake up for a moment

To give her wink

Only she will be able to see

My smiling face only

She will see me

Winking for ever at her

Then only she will know

That I did really love her so

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Comments (12)
  • Francy on Nov 16, 2009

    Lovely done.
    Keep it up.

  • Darla Cooke on Nov 16, 2009

    Very touching!

  • redmail99 on Nov 16, 2009

    !!!!

  • wonder on Nov 16, 2009

    What shall I say? Scary but a good one.

  • Themax on Nov 16, 2009

    very nice poem,Thanks:)

  • cardy on Nov 16, 2009

    A lovely sweet poem you know how to write them!

  • T.Rex McGoogle on Nov 16, 2009

    A very nice poem. You are getting so good at your chosen craft, Proud to associate my name with yours.

  • CA Johnson on Nov 16, 2009

    Good job, Lovely.

  • Jacqueline Nicole on Nov 16, 2009

    that was really lovely. well written too.

  • speckledlily on Nov 17, 2009

    Nice poem!

  • Nydia Esther on Nov 17, 2009

    very nicely done

  • CutestPrincess on Dec 7, 2009

    you did an outstanding job of writing this.

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