We are all subject to the divine love. It is not because we choose it or opt to accept it.

You did not expect it, nor saw it coming

But I opted you to be the target of my loving.

The emptiness inside, how oftentimes you’ve cried,

I know it when you’re hurt and wounded when they lied.

I always see your pain, I charge it on the rain.

You’re frightened by the storm, I made it go away.

You didn’t appreciate it, don’t worry it’s okay.

I wouldn’t have a grudge, I love you don’t you know?

I told the stars to shine and guide you on your way,

But you were lurking in the woods to stay away from me.

I called you by the thunder, you answered with a scowl.

I guessed you can’t remember the father where you from.

I always watch you and touch you when you sleep,

and though, it stinged my heart when you defy

to you I never closed an eye.

You blamed me all the miseries and tragedies on earth,

you said you’ll never praise me nor offer me a wreath.

You even curse my name in vain each time you lose a game.

You conquered your foes and rose to the top.

You said you’ve made it on your own, the credits are your alone.

But the harbor you built collapsed at once,

You beckoned your friends but no one would come.

Come on my son, everything’s done

I’ll carry you if you cannot stand.

You may not love me, but I love you.

You may not trust me, but I trusted you.

You don’t choose me but I chose you.

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  • ishinimrod on Oct 13, 2010

    I believe in this.

  • R.Laws on Oct 13, 2010

    Great Post

  • ishinimrod on Oct 14, 2010

    I like this article but I more like the author. lolz. Peace.Y_Y

  • awesome11 on Oct 14, 2010

    Good Post

  • drelayaraja on Oct 15, 2010

    Wonderful… Nice share friend…

  • bryeunade on Oct 15, 2010

    this is really touching, love your poem..

  • Sharif Ishnin on Oct 15, 2010

    Well done. Love Him or hate Him it matters not. He is your creator.:)

  • Brewed Coffee on Oct 15, 2010

    This is very beautiful. It touches the core. Love it!

  • Eunice Tan on Oct 15, 2010

    Very good.

  • gb1269 on Oct 16, 2010

    thanks for choosing me:-)

  • crisdiwata on Oct 17, 2010

    Thank you friends

  • cmanjuc on Oct 18, 2010

    Good thoughts

  • Jewelstar on Oct 18, 2010

    Each line was very impressive. Keep up the good work.

  • Likha on Oct 18, 2010

    I love this. I’m impressed with your poetry and this is a great topic to write about.

  • nobert soloria bermosa on Oct 18, 2010

    nice poem,unconditional love

  • crisdiwata on Oct 18, 2010

    Thank you friends.

  • ForTeaSicks on Oct 20, 2010

    Wow that was moving :D

    I absolutely loved it.

    Cheers,
    46

  • LOVELYHONEY on Oct 22, 2010

    very nice and beautiful words

    u must thank all

    who have read it

    and r commenting too

    10 seconds work

    but a miles long smile
    for the poet worth it

  • crisdiwata on Oct 22, 2010

    @ lovely honey: thank you for that very nice comment
    @forteasicks: cheers!

  • overclocked on Nov 22, 2010

    nice one

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