I tested myself and I conquered…

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Trekking through the mist and rain
The coldness of the clouds struck me pain
I need to take the fear of the climb
And ignore the tiresome path that I have found
Our spirit is like a mountain, we must climb it to see its view
A view from the peak, a picture of beauty beaming all around you
My heart rejoice as I touched the sky and beautiful rainbow
My joy is like a soul that lingers and embedded in you

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  • Melody SJAL on Nov 2, 2008

    Im climbing my mountain one step at a time. great!

  • Brian Daniel Stankich on Nov 2, 2008

    I was climbing this summer in Colorado. It is one of my favorite things to do.

  • C Jordan on Nov 2, 2008

    Very cleverly done. The way you have placed the discomfort, aches and achievement of a trek up a mountain with life. I congratulate you.

  • Joie Schmidt on Nov 3, 2008

    So beautiful* I especially love the line:

    Our spirit is like a mountain, we must climb it to see its view

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • Michelle Murphy on Nov 3, 2008

    This is really fantastic

  • rutherfranc on Jan 27, 2009

    very inspiring, cool picture too

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