I Deem

Intrepidus on Mar 9, 2009

A warm and love filled poem.

I deem for a warm hug

To cuddle with you under your arms

My heart sedated with drug

Your hazel eyes a virtue that charms

I deem for serendipity

A moment to ponder upon the deck

A scarlet silk, smooth around your neck

Dreaming of you, an image so pretty

I fell…

I’m falling for you

You, that wishing star

Shining through my untreated scar

I’m keen in wait to hear from you…

I deem for a dream

Of you and me, forever to be

The colours as light as cream

Are now fading in a pool of stream

I deem for your love

To feel and to heal

The myth is surreal

And I deem…

Of you for real…

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Comments (9)

hfj on Mar 9, 2009
Good love poem with nice flow. Well done.
Darla Smith on Mar 9, 2009
A very romantic poem and I love the pic!
nesita on Mar 9, 2009
Very Romantic your writings shows how sensitive you are.
Joni Keith on Mar 9, 2009
I absolutely LOVE it! This is so romantic and shows your pure heart so beautifully. It floats with hope. I think this is my favorite.
Bo Russo on Mar 10, 2009
Super attempt at being miracously talented
macon on Mar 10, 2009
wow, lovely poem that truly will deem for her to be real..
Bren Parks on Mar 10, 2009
how lovely…..
rutherfranc on Mar 11, 2009
man, you`re so romantic!
Allison Jae on Sep 23, 2010
Very romantic and beautiful.

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