Hiya, I write songs, lots of them. sometimes I throw them away, or just save them on my computer. I havent been on here in a while, so I thought id post a most recent song I wrote.
its not in the style of country, so when you sing it please no country.
the songs I write, usually only have the drum beat to it, mainly because I play the drums,
so this song has no style,
well maybe in the same style of escape the fate,
but a little bit more shy.
enjoy, and thanks for readingg.
ps, songs are poetic, so I put it under poetry.
:D .

tonight i will lie awake, thinking of things to say,
and tomorrow, is another day, so why, why cant we just
 trust ourselves?
and not put tomorrow in shame?
i see right through, your beautiful face,
and you see right through, this ugly disgrace,
i see right through, your wonderful embrace,
and you see right through,
right through,
this unimpressive place

do we have the strength to lead our lives?
do we have trust in this world?
has god, not shown us the light?
and will we ever , ever get back out?

tonight i will lie awake, thinking of things to say,
and tomorrow, is another day. so why cant we trust ourselves?
don’t put me to shame, put me to shame,

the stars shine bright,
and i know why,
your face it glows,
no more lying,
no more lying

i see right through your eyes,
even if its your disguise,
i see right through your eyes,
and i cant help noticing,
your light,

tonight i will lie awake, thinking of things to say,
and tomorrow, is another day, so why, why cant we just
 trust ourselves?

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  • thresiapaulose on Mar 26, 2011

    A lovely work. Thank you for your friendship and writing.
    Paulose

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