That is a very nice poem. Promotes good will. Well written.

great poem..I want to be your neighbor

Very sweet and uplifting poem. Nicely done and very fluid.

We are always so busy, sometime we don’t take enough time to get to know people.

We are all so different….some of us so different that we don’t work well with all others, but sometimes love is merely being able to let your neighbor pass in peace and quiet.

It would be so nice to have a neighbor such as you! Very nice and thank you for sharing this with us!

nice poem

Written with such style and passion. Keep writing.

agree, we should know our neighbor.

I’m guilty of not knowing my neighbors all that well. Seems everyone is so busy living their lives outside the neighborhood that we don’t take time to get to know those right next door.

I am guilty of not knowing my neighbors all that well. Seems everyone is so busy living their lives outside the neighborhood that we don’t take time to get to know those right next door.

I agree, we can widen out and extend our warmth and friendship to our neighbours. Thanks for these reminders.
Monica.

Excellante! This is an extremely beatutiful peace of work.
Keep this up and you might be the entire hot list.

I good poem, and would make a good song.

well written poem and I love the connotations we all ought to try and get to know each other more….. it seems our lives are so busy these days that we have no time for our fellow man…. BTW how do you do….. I’m Johnny, I dabble at writing

Really nice and how true!!! In this day and age we hardly know our neighbours.

Well written and well said!

Very very sweet… Luckily I do know my neighbours..but we are so busy that we rarely get to talk, these past few months

lovely poem.

I am so moved, what wonderful responses to this poem. Thank you all my new friends on triond. Much love!

Nice poem. We would love to know you more

Wonderful poem!

Brilliant, really enjoyed it. in this racialist world we live in

Very good observation on the society we live in today.;)

amazing poem!!

very nice, thanks for your comment

Great write! Thanks for the share!

This is a very incredibly powerful poem, it got into so much depth so quickly, with very few words.. !!!! NICE! I will send you the link, in a few minutes.. thanks for letting me link it!

Good Poem…

I like your style of writing.

This was a great poem, with an important message. Nicely done.

Thank you for that poem

Great message held within that poem xx

I can’t thank you enough for your wonderful comments. I am so glad I wrote this particular poem.

Great job, DP. The meter works and the theme of your poem here is very touching. I like this one a lot.

I especially liked the last two lines, they seem to close the thought with a hope and a perfect cap.

Just something I noticed though: in between lines 11 and 12, there almost seems like there should be a comma and a but.

Other than that, great job. Have a good day.

Stick in the mud your point is duly noted and I agree. Thank you.