I fear my poems are too silly.

I fear my poems are a bit too silly,
Like a mad, hip-hop buck-toothed hillbilly.
I should write about sometime more correct.
Something to this effect.
I feel the rain pouring down my skin
I look up amazed! Much to my chagrin.
The wet rain splashes, making puddles
My brain seems to be in several muddles.
Now I’m getting off task once again.
I can’t be serious… Amen?

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  • hfj on Jul 20, 2009

    A nice little poem Jam. I didn’t care too much about that buck-toothed hillbilly though since i’m from the south. Just kidding, it was a nice piece. Well done.

  • Babyface Jam on Jul 20, 2009

    Sorry, couldn’t think of anything else that sounded right. =S

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